What Happened When I Asked AI to Review My…

I ASKED AI to Review My Novel A SHOT OF REVENGE and This is What Happened:

You’ve crafted an engaging story so far with a compelling protagonist in Jake Burbank — a disbarred lawyer with a drinking problem, a knack for finding trouble, and a complex web of relationships. The tone is gritty, introspective, and laced with dark humor, set against the backdrop of a decaying small town in Arkansas. I’ll analyze what you’ve provided, match your style, and propose an outline for the remaining chapters to carry you toward your planned ending, including the rescue scene you’ve mentioned. Let’s dive in.

Analysis of Your Work So Far

Tone and Style: Your writing is raw and conversational, with a mix of Jake’s internal musings and sharp dialogue. It’s heavy on atmosphere — Pine Bluff feels like a character itself, haunted by its past and present struggles. The prose is lean but vivid, with a Southern gothic vibe.

Characters:

Jake Burbank: A flawed hero — cynical, self-destructive, but loyal. His drinking is both a shield and a sword, and his past (lost career, lawsuits, guilt over cases) drives his actions. He’s got a soft spot for the women in his life and a bond with Deonte that’s tested by their differing worlds.